tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post1625849269052949872..comments2023-10-12T05:28:55.319-04:00Comments on Cassiopeia Rises: Love...........Cassiopeia Riseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-20272750470981987802010-06-22T19:22:47.926-04:002010-06-22T19:22:47.926-04:00This sounds like a secret love, or passion masking...This sounds like a secret love, or passion masking as love. Sometimes it is hard to tell!Kathie Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10377224759599266209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-9996374009113552712010-06-05T03:26:33.839-04:002010-06-05T03:26:33.839-04:00Living for love and the heat of the night. Hard to...Living for love and the heat of the night. Hard to reconcile with the glare of morning. A thought provoking poem.<br />Thanks for the prompt--am enjoying all that it has inspired!gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-91416438564167401402010-06-03T22:04:08.059-04:002010-06-03T22:04:08.059-04:00Thank you Melanie! Thank you for this neat little...Thank you Melanie! Thank you for this neat little four-letter prompt that is so hard to write.<br /><br />Thank you too for your rendition. I loved the first verse and got terribly sad with the second. <br /><br />I've been both places and don't want the second ever again. The life is tolerable and more exciting but the chain breaking is Hell! Even if I was almost forever wanting it that way it was still tough to go through.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-72339868029375239802010-06-02T23:23:36.028-04:002010-06-02T23:23:36.028-04:00Is love desirable? Is it not? I think it's &qu...Is love desirable? Is it not? I think it's "...better to have loved and lost than not loved at all."<br /><br />Thanks for the thought-provoking verses.<br /><br />Best regards.Carlos Gesmundohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09916179663956556302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-22391695660131855842010-06-02T21:48:11.829-04:002010-06-02T21:48:11.829-04:00Passionate and beautiful poem. The imagery is amaz...Passionate and beautiful poem. The imagery is amazing. What an amazing take on love. Thanks for the inspiration here Melanie :)The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-76449843538292474762010-06-01T14:07:43.969-04:002010-06-01T14:07:43.969-04:00You being the initiater of the prompt,I invite you...You being the initiater of the prompt,I invite you to my page..for your feedback..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-81845799937151085522010-06-01T11:46:41.935-04:002010-06-01T11:46:41.935-04:00Thank all, for your kind comments. I am happy that...Thank all, for your kind comments. I am happy that you liked it.<br />And you too Gel makes it worthwile<br /><br /><br />Melanie.Cassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-72786364257233021182010-06-01T07:51:44.145-04:002010-06-01T07:51:44.145-04:00Beautiful, passionate, and real...lovely poem!Beautiful, passionate, and real...lovely poem!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-16157722397370451182010-06-01T04:29:33.572-04:002010-06-01T04:29:33.572-04:00what love can be? seems to act in sync with nature...what love can be? seems to act in sync with nature, the rising and the setting of sun, that bright moon and stars above as mute witnesses...:)<br /><br />beautiful thoughts indeed melanie!Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-11042356382884477342010-05-31T21:54:40.855-04:002010-05-31T21:54:40.855-04:00An interesting way to turn that around, and great ...An interesting way to turn that around, and great use of words!Carinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976869000808518440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-40104700367051733392010-05-31T20:41:25.743-04:002010-05-31T20:41:25.743-04:00Thank you for the prompt and your wonderful poem. ...Thank you for the prompt and your wonderful poem. So full of passion and desire. Are we truly chained for life?Loch Robhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10912194134878544461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-78711324030143570342010-05-31T15:08:00.236-04:002010-05-31T15:08:00.236-04:00Thanks for the prompt, and this wonderful poem. Th...Thanks for the prompt, and this wonderful poem. The wordplay, imagery and contrast make it a memorable read.The Dark Lordhttp://darklordreturns.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-68493033354229696732010-05-31T13:29:27.948-04:002010-05-31T13:29:27.948-04:00Melanie, thanks for the prompt - your words are al...Melanie, thanks for the prompt - your words are always so full of life and its complexities - always provocative and profound.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-89336245321219458872010-05-31T00:08:20.968-04:002010-05-31T00:08:20.968-04:00Hi!
I'm a newbie here and what a discovery! E...Hi! <br />I'm a newbie here and what a discovery! Enjoyed every word of your beautiful poem. Delighted! Thank you.Tamarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18111451752387602857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-32184470697988565122010-05-30T00:22:09.464-04:002010-05-30T00:22:09.464-04:00incredible poem, full of color, depth and wisdom. ...incredible poem, full of color, depth and wisdom. Thank you for a wonderful prompt.Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11279605745446513635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-75924121388168586442010-05-29T22:10:05.085-04:002010-05-29T22:10:05.085-04:00Sandy post whatever you feel is right....
Melami...Sandy post whatever you feel is right....<br /><br /><br />MelamieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-5316628187135022562010-05-29T13:06:59.765-04:002010-05-29T13:06:59.765-04:00vampires, children of the night, wolves
beauty in...vampires, children of the night, wolves <br />beauty in the darkness<br />love this piecebrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-78674063653454717482010-05-27T17:27:31.470-04:002010-05-27T17:27:31.470-04:00Dear Melanie,
The vivid contrast between the two ...Dear Melanie,<br /><br />The vivid contrast between the two stanzas of the passion of love vs its departure is so skillfully rendered by you that I'm literally shaking and tearing up. Your poem is that visceral. A majority of your fine poems affect me that way.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />GelGelhttp://SoulCrayons.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-78108736825741249162010-05-27T12:37:50.509-04:002010-05-27T12:37:50.509-04:00My first visit and I am so happy that I did.. Oh! ...My first visit and I am so happy that I did.. Oh! You write so beautiful.. I liked the way you have weaved the poem even if the ending is a bit sad..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-30128598598279304342010-05-26T22:09:11.902-04:002010-05-26T22:09:11.902-04:00An incredible poem. Shall we post this to the OSI ...An incredible poem. Shall we post this to the OSI homepage Sunday? Let me know.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-58384774937530543492010-05-26T10:18:03.282-04:002010-05-26T10:18:03.282-04:00Thank you Harshad. I am so glad you liked it.
Me...Thank you Harshad. I am so glad you liked it.<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-11595417235376374892010-05-26T09:16:40.381-04:002010-05-26T09:16:40.381-04:00Wow!
'we are all chained for life......
a sen...Wow!<br /><br />'we are all chained for life......<br />a sentence without a chance of parole<br />hidden from the days light, waiting for dark'<br /><br />Passion in waiting... so beautifully described.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.com