tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post4177365873080921848..comments2023-10-12T05:28:55.319-04:00Comments on Cassiopeia Rises: Can I Allow.......Cassiopeia Riseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-76483216832974271932009-08-29T23:11:15.676-04:002009-08-29T23:11:15.676-04:00Your poem is full of feeling and pondering the pos...Your poem is full of feeling and pondering the possibilities of life. Forgiving can seem impossible and then it can just happen,,,, like slipping into a warm pond.Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-26293245140677896942009-08-29T20:24:58.054-04:002009-08-29T20:24:58.054-04:00It is wonderful when we finally forgive ourselves ...It is wonderful when we finally forgive ourselves and allow ourselves to be less than perfect. Poetry will help you I know.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-34472609944105969262009-08-26T01:37:16.592-04:002009-08-26T01:37:16.592-04:00Enjoyed the read very much... the words sure strik...Enjoyed the read very much... the words sure strike home.. I guess we all face such troubles, and deal with them in our own unique ways.. I'd say the whole process is a worthy experience that is highly educating for us, and we learn to cope better...The Dark Lordhttp://darklordreturns.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-36192557354018353372009-08-26T00:23:14.259-04:002009-08-26T00:23:14.259-04:00This is deep and kind of resonates and ringsThis is deep and kind of resonates and ringsJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-60836270326944504112009-08-25T23:00:12.857-04:002009-08-25T23:00:12.857-04:00Oh B.D, please, please endure for a bit more. You...Oh B.D, please, please endure for a bit more. Your poet has had a tough time, I do think it will serve no purpose to linger on these things more.<br />I say forget as best you can. If forgiving will HELP to forget, then forgive.<br /><br />I lived this life for over a year, I got a little apartment in the cheap part of town, an unlisted phone, didn't socialize, and essentially 'holed up.'<br /><br />Crow eating time came when I paid off the J.C.Penny's card, started to the beach to 'celebrate' but my eight year old VW Bug broke on the road. My ex and her new 'other' hauled me home from out in the boonies in the formerly 'our' new Ford.<br /><br />I vowed to never to have that happen again, I didn't deserve life like that. So I bought a one year old Ford Thunderbird and made a life that I didn't think even existed.<br /><br />Mrs. Jim recivilised me three years later but those three years before of a life I never had before were the best of my life.<br /><br />I forgave in my heart (almost, pretty much) but never did a confrontation to say I forgave.<br /><br />There are other bits but I've written too much already.<br /><br />I did have some health problems as well, but nothing like you are experiencing. <br /><br />((((( Hugs ))))<br /><br />This is wonderful poetry even though it relates to problems we don't like to confront.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-10994478720589405182009-08-25T21:02:25.981-04:002009-08-25T21:02:25.981-04:00This is an amazing poem which everyone can relate ...This is an amazing poem which everyone can relate to...how wonderful would it be to lay all burdens down. Beautifully written. I love your writing : )The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-76599298820778191802009-08-25T20:24:57.281-04:002009-08-25T20:24:57.281-04:00beautiful and somewhat haunting...I can relate to ...beautiful and somewhat haunting...I can relate to the first 2 stanzas completely~Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-66526950578284359182009-08-25T18:07:19.113-04:002009-08-25T18:07:19.113-04:00I think it may be self-destructive not to forgive ...I think it may be self-destructive not to forgive or not to seek peace and joy - your words resonate with so many emotions<br /><br />hope you are doing well Melanie -<br /><br />lotsa luv ann xoxoxoxannhttp://annraven1.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-61820030937023963762009-08-25T17:18:18.424-04:002009-08-25T17:18:18.424-04:00We delve into such thoughts to free ourselves, tac...We delve into such thoughts to free ourselves, tackle our frustrations and then put them aside, and live.<br />Beautiful words.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-81090402391170925892009-08-25T17:05:48.589-04:002009-08-25T17:05:48.589-04:00YOur last line really hit home...
A thoughtful ta...YOur last line really hit home...<br /><br />A thoughtful take on this prompt, well done.<br /><br />Hugs, GGeraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-20266547192028478162009-08-25T16:47:37.233-04:002009-08-25T16:47:37.233-04:00Let your heart soar! So full of feeling--it is not...Let your heart soar! So full of feeling--it is not hollow!SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-2849135410150345552009-08-25T16:38:48.101-04:002009-08-25T16:38:48.101-04:00Give yourself a break --- and allow yourself not t...Give yourself a break --- and allow yourself not to worry about such things, just live! At least that is what I am trying to do.<br /><br />Enjoyed the read.Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.com