tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post4490421657288676444..comments2023-10-12T05:28:55.319-04:00Comments on Cassiopeia Rises: Mystic OceanCassiopeia Riseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-30024660554694375262010-11-06T12:00:35.052-04:002010-11-06T12:00:35.052-04:00Sarah, you are so sweet to come once again to read...Sarah, you are so sweet to come once again to read my Haiku. So glad you liked it.<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-1063827275823363642010-11-05T16:44:48.738-04:002010-11-05T16:44:48.738-04:00Sometimes the middle of a thought shows hidden dep...Sometimes the middle of a thought shows hidden depths.Such a soft feel to this and I love how they are Haiku but not in your face. They just seem natural and not forced.SarahAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14791948357280208382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-36199421573163869502010-11-05T11:44:16.577-04:002010-11-05T11:44:16.577-04:00Thank you Catherine for reading my KUs. I was in t...Thank you Catherine for reading my KUs. I was in the middle of a thought when I wrote them. As you say I could have woven the words in a different pattern. Glad you liked them.<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-3914120327048868922010-11-05T11:41:04.545-04:002010-11-05T11:41:04.545-04:00Much thanks Leo. Glad you liked my work.
MelanieMuch thanks Leo. Glad you liked my work.<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-561485011813720582010-11-05T11:40:07.848-04:002010-11-05T11:40:07.848-04:00So glad you liked this poem Kevin. I always feel t...So glad you liked this poem Kevin. I always feel that I am painting with words.Much thanks for your comments.<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-85175834236089012392010-11-05T11:31:33.214-04:002010-11-05T11:31:33.214-04:00Dan, we are all here to support and give advice ow...Dan, we are all here to support and give advice own our poetry. I welcome your comments and your use of my words. It sounds better the way you put it. Thanks very much.<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-65313877996646234462010-11-05T05:19:29.785-04:002010-11-05T05:19:29.785-04:00Great haikus. I agree with Dan that you could hav...Great haikus. I agree with Dan that you could have created another brilliant one by combining first two and last lines... Well written and visually evocative.Catherine Mackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07740025648799655351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-89991798065445274392010-11-05T01:25:56.258-04:002010-11-05T01:25:56.258-04:00beautiful...nice haikus, Melanie.. its always love...beautiful...nice haikus, Melanie.. its always lovely to see u at HH :)Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-87773840411425121182010-11-04T12:51:20.509-04:002010-11-04T12:51:20.509-04:00...exquisitely clever... i like not only the first......exquisitely clever... i like not only the first, second or the last line but i like every single words you used and painted here... your poems are the real layered clouds of mist that fills our(your readers) emptiness... cheers!!!:)<br /><br />TC.<br /><br />~Kelvinkelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08116213800655914273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-7594584297615162010-11-03T21:18:56.657-04:002010-11-03T21:18:56.657-04:00Hi, Thank you so much for following my blog and fo...Hi, Thank you so much for following my blog and for your kind comments. <br /><br />These are beautiful words! I too especially like the last line, and also the first two. These three lines in themselves would form their own poem:<br />"Layered clouds of mist<br />ride the silver lit ocean,<br />magic fills the void"<br />(I hope you don't mind me putting your lines togther like that, please feel free to delete my comments if it offends)<br /><br />Words I wish I'd come up with myself!Suburban Farmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02970891728128569513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-88256295731038155032010-11-03T17:35:16.144-04:002010-11-03T17:35:16.144-04:00Much thanks Sumit and thanks for following me.
M...Much thanks Sumit and thanks for following me.<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-91187676239120411432010-11-03T14:36:05.604-04:002010-11-03T14:36:05.604-04:00Nice haikus...
I agree with Uma too... :)Nice haikus...<br />I agree with Uma too... :)eyeographyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05508519847517495863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-31221487371057589492010-11-03T12:46:13.324-04:002010-11-03T12:46:13.324-04:00Thanks uma.a. Glad you liked it.
MelanieThanks uma.a. Glad you liked it.<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-77104913579125275492010-11-03T12:05:13.401-04:002010-11-03T12:05:13.401-04:00Wonderful poem..I esp.like the end
Magic fills the...Wonderful poem..I esp.like the end<br />Magic fills the voids :)Uma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.com