tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post706887696406314712..comments2023-10-12T05:28:55.319-04:00Comments on Cassiopeia Rises: Sun CloudsCassiopeia Riseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-28344890776930712212010-01-31T03:40:38.004-05:002010-01-31T03:40:38.004-05:00hypnotic, both the sway of the hammock and the sto...hypnotic, both the sway of the hammock and the stony silence. <br />beautifully craftedgabriellehttp://wildgoosescoopsmoon.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-32040339260948405042010-01-29T17:09:34.625-05:002010-01-29T17:09:34.625-05:00From warm to cold, this plays against time, life a...From warm to cold, this plays against time, life and fine slices of reality. Love it!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-17598112275179406402010-01-27T20:30:34.445-05:002010-01-27T20:30:34.445-05:00What a day, and what transformations. Wow.What a day, and what transformations. Wow.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-63462065843807555702010-01-27T14:28:14.983-05:002010-01-27T14:28:14.983-05:00Melanie, this is wonderful. Just as I remember. ...Melanie, this is wonderful. Just as I remember. Except the cold never awakened me back to real life. A misquito or fly, perhaps.<br /><br />I remember the last time, it was in Mexico. The breeze and the waves against the rocks and sand sang their songs while I dreamed of wherever my mind would go.<br /><br />Thank you. I liked especially the way you portrayed the hard rude awakening,<br />"<i>once more cold returns to grip the heart<br />silence surrounds silence,darkening visions it pulls,<br />it eats away your woven conjures, deluding reality</i>"<br /><br />Yes, your getting tired of cold and snow was a really good inspiratioin for you. Sorry 'bout it though. (I played golf here again yesterday. We can play year round.)<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-11055227179181884062010-01-27T12:30:23.350-05:002010-01-27T12:30:23.350-05:00I feel as though I have wandered through many seas...I feel as though I have wandered through many seasons, such is the power of your words.Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-27413956642601162202010-01-26T12:20:10.169-05:002010-01-26T12:20:10.169-05:00AAB, my what an unusual pen name. I an glad you st...AAB, my what an unusual pen name. I an glad you stop and read my poem. I am glad you liked it.<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-30409068110748908352010-01-26T12:17:50.730-05:002010-01-26T12:17:50.730-05:00Thanks Stan for stopping by and reading my poem. I...Thanks Stan for stopping by and reading my poem. I am happy you liked it.<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-59560479559388790072010-01-26T12:16:40.899-05:002010-01-26T12:16:40.899-05:00Thank you Andy for your kinf comments on this poem...Thank you Andy for your kinf comments on this poem<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-20876068303670504462010-01-26T05:30:08.321-05:002010-01-26T05:30:08.321-05:00‘a sigh rose from deep within my soul’ reading you...‘a sigh rose from deep within my soul’ reading your poem.It seemed to evoke in me a very similar acquaintance with the ‘yawning earth’ and an experience of 'breathing in memories of summers past’.I loved your poem.Thank you.Sasidharan Cheruvattathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08760723067087128881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-44532279025233954832010-01-25T19:08:08.815-05:002010-01-25T19:08:08.815-05:00Relief of dreams and realisation of reality - nice...Relief of dreams and realisation of reality - nicely penned.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-71661894448769329312010-01-25T19:07:36.106-05:002010-01-25T19:07:36.106-05:00From the warm to the cold, from the light to the d...From the warm to the cold, from the light to the dark the words are still whispering in my ears...Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-87617482170160040612010-01-25T18:19:37.586-05:002010-01-25T18:19:37.586-05:00Thank you Linda for you kind comments. I am happy ...Thank you Linda for you kind comments. I am happy that you liked it.<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-14225088721340632352010-01-25T16:38:38.957-05:002010-01-25T16:38:38.957-05:00What a peaceful and relaxing mood you created here...What a peaceful and relaxing mood you created here! They rhythm is like being in a rocking chair.Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-24367942868388896162010-01-25T10:05:30.119-05:002010-01-25T10:05:30.119-05:00Thank you very much for your kind comments. I am h...Thank you very much for your kind comments. I am happy that you liked it.<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1765897791812853020.post-3013775414903683192010-01-24T14:25:44.490-05:002010-01-24T14:25:44.490-05:00Wonderful wonderful... you paint a dreamscape with...Wonderful wonderful... you paint a dreamscape with your words here. I like how you explored the ins and outs of such a day, how it's never just one thing or the other. Thanks for this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com