Sunday, April 25, 2010

Haiku Bones.....



cool gentle night rains
stepping through puddles of life
searching for the road

15 comments:

Jim said...

I like the imagery here, Melanie, stepping through those puddles can be fun.
Also there are Sir Walter Raleighs in life which lead to the road. Can we find one? :)
..

rdl said...

i hear you on this one! nice work!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...
This comment has been removed by the author.
Magical Mystical Teacher said...

rain seeking roadway
puddles gather like desires
caressing my toes

Rainless night

gautami tripathy said...

Like it, Melanie!

clouds roll over

John's comments said...

ooh switches and imagery with more then one meaning-clever. Here's mine.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Jim, I have found one from long ago but it is too late for us.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

rdl, thanks for stopping by. Glad you like it.




Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks MMT. I could have said:

night rains
stepping through puddles
searching for the road

More to the point I think.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Tami. I will be by.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

John, what are you up t0? Do you have a new web page?
Thank for stopping by. Now I will read yours.


Melanie

gabrielle said...

Still searching. Nice one!

fourwindshaiga said...

Harder at night, but more interesting.

SOL said...

Enjoyed the image in this poem.

rdl said...

Yes, still searching. good one!