Cassiopeia Rises: Haiku Bones.....

Sunday, April 25, 2010

Haiku Bones.....

cool gentle night rains
stepping through puddles of life
searching for the road

15 comments:

Jim said...: I like the imagery here, Melanie, stepping through those puddles can be fun.
Also there are Sir Walter Raleighs in life which lead to the road. Can we find one? :)
..; April 25, 2010 at 4:31 PM
rdl said...: i hear you on this one! nice work!; April 25, 2010 at 6:40 PM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: This comment has been removed by the author.; April 25, 2010 at 6:45 PM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: rain seeking roadway
puddles gather like desires
caressing my toes

Rainless night; April 25, 2010 at 6:46 PM
gautami tripathy said...: Like it, Melanie!

clouds roll over; April 26, 2010 at 9:10 AM
John (@bookdreamer) said...: ooh switches and imagery with more then one meaning-clever. Here's mine.; April 26, 2010 at 9:31 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Jim, I have found one from long ago but it is too late for us.; April 26, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: rdl, thanks for stopping by. Glad you like it.

Melanie; April 26, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks MMT. I could have said:

night rains
stepping through puddles
searching for the road

More to the point I think.

Melanie; April 26, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Tami. I will be by.

Melanie; April 26, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: John, what are you up t0? Do you have a new web page?
Thank for stopping by. Now I will read yours.

Melanie; April 26, 2010 at 10:41 AM
gabrielle said...: Still searching. Nice one!; April 26, 2010 at 11:43 AM
Anonymous said...: Harder at night, but more interesting.; April 26, 2010 at 3:39 PM
spiritsoflena said...: Enjoyed the image in this poem.; April 26, 2010 at 6:09 PM
rdl said...: Yes, still searching. good one!; April 27, 2010 at 10:37 PM

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