Monday, July 20, 2009

Love Has No Pride.....

love has no pride
love has no pain
in the darkness that is my soul
we walk a misty path

set me free
set me free
the sky ablaze sings
colors changing hue
they could not love you as I do
they did not know how


Silver said...

Your poetry is beautiful. The words and expressions are marvellous. So honest, open and painful.


Lynne said...

Dear Melanie,
Exquisite- each and every one of your poems moves me as if you're sculpting my emotions.(I read two pages of poetry but cannot comment on each amazing poem. I'm too caught up in emotion.) Your jeweled words turn me inside out deftly and with finesse.

I've been thinking of you often even though I was out of blogland for a few months.

w/ love and friendship,

kpatrick said...

great but haiku really? seventeen syllables in three unrhymed lines of five, seven and five syllables?
pls help me as i am lost here.

kpatrick said...

haiku limerick which is which.