Thursday, July 16, 2009

NaisaiKu Challenge!

pain is a solid wall
surrounding my soul
I grow tired, so tired of
I grow so tired, so tired
surrounding my soul
pain is a solid wall


Jessie said...

thank you for stopping by and i'm happy you decided to follow my blog. i hope you always leave a comment, suggestion, or just a smile.

you have written some warm words on your space. i'll return often.

andy said...

Hi Bd, yeah pain can be a real pain, I bet! You put it so well!!

Thanks for posting to The NaiSaiKu Challenge?

Janet Jarrell said...

You make pain seem insurmountable - ouch.

Nice post.

Stan Ski said...

Pain - an ideal subject for the NaiSaiKu - the repetition

Tumblewords: said...

Lovely, as always. Melancholy. Haunting. Melodious. Pain circles, recircles. The format is perfect for this topic. Be well!