Thursday, July 16, 2009

NaisaiKu Challenge!

pain is a solid wall
surrounding my soul
I grow tired, so tired of
Pain
I grow so tired, so tired
surrounding my soul
pain is a solid wall
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5 comments:

Jessie said...

thank you for stopping by and i'm happy you decided to follow my blog. i hope you always leave a comment, suggestion, or just a smile.

you have written some warm words on your space. i'll return often.
:-)

July 16, 2009 at 11:01 AM
andy said...

Hi Bd, yeah pain can be a real pain, I bet! You put it so well!!

Thanks for posting to The NaiSaiKu Challenge?

July 16, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Janet Jarrell said...

You make pain seem insurmountable - ouch.

Nice post.

July 16, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Stan Ski said...

Pain - an ideal subject for the NaiSaiKu - the repetition

July 16, 2009 at 7:37 PM
Tumblewords: said...

Lovely, as always. Melancholy. Haunting. Melodious. Pain circles, recircles. The format is perfect for this topic. Be well!

July 23, 2009 at 5:25 PM

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