Wednesday, November 18, 2009


to return again and again
would lie heavy on my heart
for I would hold hands with you
my love for all eternity


fourwindshaiga said...

Yes, there is something slighty distressing about that. I agree with your thoughts, though.

This is the first time I have been able to get your page open. Must have been doing something wrong.

Jim said...

Hi Melanie, those are words a person likes to hear. Your poet is smitten hard by the love bug. :-)
I also had problems getting your page to open earlier. This time, presto, it was open.

SandyCarlson said...

To have such a love with whom to hold hands--heaven.

Geraldine said...

Beautiful words Melanie. This is a thoughtful interpretation of this prompt.

gautami tripathy said...

You did well. I like how you interpreted it.

time and time again

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Amity Me said...

Hi Melanie;

'hold hands til eternity?

awwss, so sweet dear!

Tumblewords: said...

Mind boggling beautiful!

gabrielle said...

Ah what tenderness lies here!

Quiet Paths said...

This is such a different angle on this prompt. It would make things very complicated... yes.

Loch Rob said...

Do we see our soul mate for eternity, or do things change? It seems like all we really know is here and now. Nice.