to return again and again
would lie heavy on my heart
for I would hold hands with you
my love for all eternity
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
1916
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!
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10 comments:
Yes, there is something slighty distressing about that. I agree with your thoughts, though.
This is the first time I have been able to get your page open. Must have been doing something wrong.
Hi Melanie, those are words a person likes to hear. Your poet is smitten hard by the love bug. :-)
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I also had problems getting your page to open earlier. This time, presto, it was open.
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To have such a love with whom to hold hands--heaven.
Beautiful words Melanie. This is a thoughtful interpretation of this prompt.
You did well. I like how you interpreted it.
time and time again
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Hi Melanie;
'hold hands til eternity?
awwss, so sweet dear!
Mind boggling beautiful!
Ah what tenderness lies here!
This is such a different angle on this prompt. It would make things very complicated... yes.
Do we see our soul mate for eternity, or do things change? It seems like all we really know is here and now. Nice.
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