Sunday, December 20, 2009

Fleeting....Haiku My Heart


fleeting are our days
count count the hours as they pass
petals drop fore lorn

22 comments:

anthonynorth said...

An excellent, meaningful haiku.

Nancy Bea Miller said...

Nice!

Tumblewords: said...

It does go so fast, particularly in retrospect! Nice work, Melanie!

Bruce Miller said...

Original and clever, enjoyed reading it and thinking about it.

SandyCarlson said...

I believe the petals feel this as they fall. Beautifully done.

Heike said...

Just beautiful!

fourwindshaiga said...

And, it seems to be going faster!
Good poem.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Anthony for your kind comments. I very glad you liked it.


love,Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Nancy, thanks for stopping by and read my work. I love your paintings. I also am an artist.




love,Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

So true Sue. The older I get, the faster time fly's. Now we start remembering all the should haves and the what if's.


love,Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Bruce, I thank you much for taking the time to read my work. I am glad you liked.



love,Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

So do I Sandy but we always have, Lord willing spring to hope for.
We got two feet of the white stuff yesterday. I could not find the paper in AM. LOL


love,Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Heike, thank you for stopping by. I hope that that twitter prompt is gone. Blogger says something is wrong and they are working on it.
I am happy you like my poem.


love,Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

fwh, I wish time would take a vacation or like a Merry-go-round, go backwards. Boy would I have done some things differently.LOL
I am glad you like my work.


love,Melanie

if said...

so true...well said!

sarah said...

what a lovely site you have here :-) I love your header image!!

Artist Victoria O'Neill said...

hi, i really like the way you used the word count twice. very effective. wonderful haiku

Quiet Paths said...

Our moments are very much like flower petals; great image w/ words.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks if. for reading my work. Your comments are very kind.


love,Melanie-Cassi

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Sarah, thank you for reading my work. You too kind.



love,Melanie-Cassi

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Quiet Paths, thanks for read my work. I am very glad you liked it.



love,Melanie-Cassi

rebecca said...

yes.
i love this!
do come on thurday evening...
and feel free to capture the haiku button on the right side of my blog...click on it and link to that post.
this way we can cast a wider net for the love of haiku!