Wednesday, February 10, 2010

New Moon



on the thirteenth day, in the sky
comes a new moon
as power of love increases
a spell covers all
with one single rising of a full moon

10 comments:

Jim said...

Go girl, I am waiting for that next full moon. (I grow fangs and bite women!)
That wasn't real nice to say for such a nice romantic poem you have written. Too bad my backspace key is broken.

But yes, things do change with the full moon, I believe it brings cheer, encouragement, romance, and courage.
..
BTW, thanks for your comment. I had three endings for that one:
1st to omit the last verse;
2nd to do as I did; and
3rd to express hopes for the Sugar Momma.
I may change it later.
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gel said...

Moon's mystery, power, awe. The promise of the new moon.
Always thinking of you w/ love,
gel

Tumblewords: said...

Lovely luna! Perfect single.

Loretta Markell said...

I too am fascinated by the moon. The idea that the full moon covers all is comforting. Can't wait till she returns.

anthonynorth said...

You make the moon so comforting here.
You'll find mine here.

Cloudia said...

Aloha, Friend!


Comfort Spiral

Tammie Lee said...

reads like a wonderful incantation~

SandyCarlson said...

Oh, to be open to this!

The Amateur Poet said...

wow!! this was super.. waiting for that next full moon, like Jim said...

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks to you all for reading my poem.
I am sorry that I must thank you all at once. I just returned from the the hospital yesterday.
You are all so kind and I value your comments.

Melanie