Tuesday, August 3, 2010

Dreams Of A Cacoon



tiny bud of dreams
dreams of nights beneath the stars
ages still i wait

10 comments:

Tammie said...

I really like the imagery in your first two lines
and the hope in the last~

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Tammie. I am glad you liked it.




Melanie

ρομπερτ said...

As only what can be dreamed of is possible to become reality, this might be a promise in the making.

Please have a great Wednesday.

daily athens

The Write Girl said...

What a lovely Haiku Melanie...beautifully written. It's always nice to visit you and your lovely words.

SandyCarlson said...

May the waiting bear fruit!

Harshad mehta said...

Waiting too is romantic!

Tumblewords: said...

Melanie, I love this!!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Dreams within
waiting to unfold—
set them free!

My Haiku Heights

Jim said...

Oh, Melanie, so real and beautiful yet so elusive with a very anguishing wait here. This is life described in three in a three-line haiku, isn't it?
Sorry I'm so late in getting back here, my week was very busy and hectic.
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Templeton's fury said...

Melanie i love this one. I agree that we are fellows of the same clan. Being oppositional as i am, i also never put much stock in horoscope profiles. However, upon reading the description, i know i am a true Gemini in many forms. Thank you for you kind words and i am certain that our paths will cross again in the future. I identify with the somber mood of your work and find it inspiring.

Katie