behind a child's dreams
shadows tread oh so softly
darkness slowly blooms
a mind fresh no fear
swiftly grows within a void
innocence is lost
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9 comments:
Ohh, darkness... I can feel the turmoil in there. Nicely written!
Glad to have you on board with us!
Hi Melanie, it's been a while. It sure is nice to see you writing the haiku circuit. :)
I like your this 'has to happen' set. Do you remember ... Of course, we all do!
((((HUGS))))
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I have an OSI for this week but it is in hiding now that Mr. Linky went away. I may make rounds there tomorrow night.
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That soo describes growing up.
well put.
every child has beautiful dreams, reality hits ...
this poem is psychological vivid.
WoW.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/19/haiku-struggle-plus-belated-birthdays-awards/
three awards,
if possible,
help visit 4 friends on top list, never mind if uninterested, I don't intend to press ... ;)
many thanks..
BEST!
It goes like that, doesn't it? It seems darkness hunts innocence. A cruel game.
A strong poem. Says so much in few words!
Welcome to Poets United.
I have been ill of late. I thank you all for reading my poem and for your wonderful comments.
Melanie
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