My hands open the curtains of your being
I have loved you long these many yearsOur hearts entwined, growing together,inseparable
I have memorized the touch of your fragrant silken skin
Each curve a tender path that I must travel
As I reach for your soft mellow body
you tremble ever so slightly as if a cool wind covered your heart
Oh, open your door my love, fill my desire
As I hold you close, I feel your softness melt into me
9 comments:
I love this piece, especially the first line. Behind the curtain, don't we always find a part of ourselves? Btw: You probably mean "inseparable".
very detailed write,
awesome job..
:)
Beautiful sensuous, erotic. Nice write.
Here is my prompt response:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/21/inseparable-divine/
So beautiful, palpable, and tender. I loved this Melanie :)
Beautiful portrayal of gentle love.
awesome...
Beautifully expressed....very emotive, loved it.
So very passionately put.. candid indeed..
beautiful and tender! a nice take Melanie!
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the wonderful wonder of familiarity... a beautiful poem... that we would all experience this in a lifetime..
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