Sunday, March 20, 2011

The Curtain Of Your Beinging... Inseparable



My hands open the curtains of your being
I have loved you long these many years
Our hearts entwined, growing together,inseparable

I have memorized the touch of your fragrant silken skin
Each curve a tender path that I must travel
As I reach for your soft mellow body

you tremble ever so slightly as if a cool wind covered your heart
Oh, open your door my love, fill my desire
As I hold you close, I feel your softness melt into me

9 comments:

Martin said...

I love this piece, especially the first line. Behind the curtain, don't we always find a part of ourselves? Btw: You probably mean "inseparable".

Jingle said...

very detailed write,
awesome job..
:)

Unknown said...

Beautiful sensuous, erotic. Nice write.
Here is my prompt response:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/21/inseparable-divine/

The Write Girl said...

So beautiful, palpable, and tender. I loved this Melanie :)

PremI said...

Beautiful portrayal of gentle love.

awesome...

Eclipse said...

Beautifully expressed....very emotive, loved it.

Ramesh Sood said...

So very passionately put.. candid indeed..

Vinay Leo R. said...

beautiful and tender! a nice take Melanie!

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ms pie said...

the wonderful wonder of familiarity... a beautiful poem... that we would all experience this in a lifetime..