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sad....lots of feeling packed in your lines....better to loved and lost though eh? sleep well...
oh my...much sadness in this..the dreams tasted and at one point it's all over...good job on the form and you def. managed to pack some tight emotions into this one
"and yet I lost it all" ... A lot of pain here. Sleeping is good medicine for sorrow.
Sadness always brings refkection into the course of our lives. I really enjoyed this, though sorrowful.
Yes, the melancholy does seep through strongly in this composition... You use the structure so subtly, the best way possible.
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!