Cassiopeia Rises: Once I Walk This Earth

Friday, June 29, 2012

Once I Walk This Earth

once I walked this earth
tasted all its dreams
once my heart knew love
and yet I lost it all
to late now I sleep

for de verse poets
by Melanie Bishop

6 comments:

Brian Miller said...: sad....lots of feeling packed in your lines....better to loved and lost though eh? sleep well...; June 29, 2012 at 1:38 PM
Claudia said...: oh my...much sadness in this..the dreams tasted and at one point it's all over...good job on the form and you def. managed to pack some tight emotions into this one; June 29, 2012 at 2:53 PM
rdl said...: very nice!!; June 29, 2012 at 8:01 PM
rosemary mint said...: "and yet I lost it all" ... A lot of pain here. Sleeping is good medicine for sorrow.; June 29, 2012 at 8:04 PM
Unknown said...: Sadness always brings refkection into the course of our lives. I really enjoyed this, though sorrowful.; June 29, 2012 at 10:38 PM
Semaphore said...: Yes, the melancholy does seep through strongly in this composition... You use the structure so subtly, the best way possible.; June 30, 2012 at 12:03 AM