Cassiopeia Rises: Old Oak Tree

Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Old Oak Tree

a proud old oak tree
bent by time and clinging vines
supported rough bark

dressed with sweet roses
it remembered summers warmth
shimmering in light

Haiku Heights
by Melanie Bishop

7 comments:

kaykuala said...: You very cleverly depicted the usual old oak tree look. A semblance of a physical toughness and of being around for some while. Nice haiku Melanie!

Hank; June 28, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Jaideep Rao said...: Beautifully poetic, warmth truly felt.; June 28, 2012 at 10:46 AM
Tigerbrite said...: Made me think of England, the old oak tree and the rose.); June 28, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you both for reading my poem. I am a bit rusty.

Melanie; June 28, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Grace said...: I like the image of the proud oak tree, shimmering in light ~ Lovely set ~; June 28, 2012 at 9:08 PM
NAWAL said...: Amazingly crafted!!!; June 29, 2012 at 2:07 AM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: You have described something sacred.

Supporting Buttresses; June 29, 2012 at 11:04 PM

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