Sunday, July 22, 2012

Meaning

what meaning has love
by what starlight do we walk
this rose laden path

a meaning so deep
our hearts are pierced with longing
 notice not we time

6 comments:

vivinfrance said...

Lovely idea. I was intrigued by the order of words in the final line.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Your questions are arousing!

Meaning in Shadows

kkkkaty said...

I like your Cassiopeia Rises theme..yes, how deep the feelings are when you are young...deeper as time goes along, too;)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you vivinfranc,MMT and kkkkaty
for reading my Haiku,
viv, the last line is really the beginning.
Think about it!


Melanie

Leo said...

I like it. Reads both ways and works.. That rose laden path of love would have thorns too. Need to tread carefully I guess.

Grace said...

I like the rose laden path ~

It would be easier to comment if you turn off your word verification ~