Cassiopeia Rises: Meaning

Sunday, July 22, 2012

what meaning has love
by what starlight do we walk
this rose laden path

a meaning so deep
our hearts are pierced with longing
notice not we time

vivinfrance said...: Lovely idea. I was intrigued by the order of words in the final line.; July 23, 2012 at 3:27 AM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: Your questions are arousing!

Meaning in Shadows; July 24, 2012 at 11:04 PM
Kathy Reed said...: I like your Cassiopeia Rises theme..yes, how deep the feelings are when you are young...deeper as time goes along, too;); July 25, 2012 at 1:26 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you vivinfranc,MMT and kkkkaty
for reading my Haiku,
viv, the last line is really the beginning.
Think about it!

Melanie; July 25, 2012 at 1:43 PM
Vinay Leo R. said...: I like it. Reads both ways and works.. That rose laden path of love would have thorns too. Need to tread carefully I guess.; July 26, 2012 at 8:59 AM
Grace said...: I like the rose laden path ~

It would be easier to comment if you turn off your word verification ~; July 27, 2012 at 5:37 PM