Cassiopeia Rises: Ice Leaf

Saturday, January 9, 2010

Ice Leaf

trembling ice leaf
colors of winters passing
hope quivers in sun

10 comments:

Tumblewords: said...: Nice, Melanie! I like the ice leaf as a carrier of hope and winter color!; January 10, 2010 at 1:55 PM
Artist Victoria O'Neill said...: hmmmm.....winter and warmth....and hope....nicely assemblage.; January 10, 2010 at 7:21 PM
Quiet Paths said...: I really like this; I can see it! You've caught winter; it persists on our hope.; January 11, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Stan Ski said...: Beautiful image.; January 11, 2010 at 6:39 PM
Wendy Naisa said...: Shiver, shiver...
I love that word
'quivers'; January 12, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Jim said...: Very nice haiku, Melanie. Yes, old Sol has not let us down since I've been around. :-)
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On the senyru, this sums it up. "Senyru are like haiku, except they reveal an aspect of human nature juxtaposed with an image of nature. In contrast, haiku are short Japanese poems that invite us into a shared experience of nature." [ http://www.ehow.com/how_4495033_write-senyru.html - How to Write Senyru ]
Just a lot of people call both 'haiku' and don't worry about things.
..; January 12, 2010 at 1:58 PM
Aulice Payne said...: Oh quivering ice - so great, thanks for this lovely image.; January 13, 2010 at 5:30 PM
Lisa at Greenbow said...: I can see the leaf striving to break away on its own. Trying so hard.; January 14, 2010 at 8:10 AM
lissa said...: I see winter melting away...nice take; January 14, 2010 at 4:00 PM
Nancy Bea Miller said...: Very poetic! Wea re all warming to hope as the sun strengthens, aren't we?; January 14, 2010 at 9:37 PM

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