Sunday, January 17, 2010

Behind Your Eyes

look, look deep into your eyes
behind the color blue
______rimed with darkness
a nebula world, one few know
few care, few will ever see

in twilight, your eyes open
letting in the nights shadows
_______shadows that fill you
shadows that complete you
weaving webs of deceit and fear

beware the dimly lit paths
aglow around you, drawing, pulling
_______like spirit lights on the moors
we will suck you dry and snatch your soul
no second chance, no escape


Jeeves said...

This is like a diff world behind the eyes

Andy Sewina said...

Amazing, this is spot on! I'm fascinated with the little world of fractals and kaleidoscopic projections that are constantly 'playing' behind the eye. I made a thing to try to capture them from a Kool-Aid tube. I used the sugar free one, but you could ...

Did I tell you, I love your poetry!

Gordon Mason said...

Like the images here, particularly 'rimed with darkness'.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Jeeves, thanks so much for reading my work. There are many secrets behind peoples eyes.


Cassiopeia Rises said...

Andy I too love kaleidoscopic images
I am happy that you stopped to read my poem and thank you. It makes me happy that someone out there likes my poetry.


Jill said...

wow! A great lecture of the darkness of someone that seem docile!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Gordon. I am glad that you liked this poem. There many sides to a story, Yes?


Cassiopeia Rises said...

Jill, glad you stopped by. No one really knows what lies within. Glad you liked it.


Yousei Hime said...

Rather like a spell. Thanks for sharing this.

Ariel said...

It sounds scary but what you've written is very true.

Dulce said...

Oh How nice you've found me so that I found you... Pleased to meet you.
I so love your blog!