Saturday, January 16, 2010

Extreme



extreme sadness
____heart empties
into river of tears
hardens
as your face fades
nothing, nothing left,nothing
no you ,no us
_____alone with
just shadows of where you once were

4 comments:

Dee Martin said...

very sad, but lovely.

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linda may said...

Heart breaking.

andy said...

Phew, this really is extreme, you've captured the prompt word and catapulted it into mid-stream.

Nicely!

bellasis said...

I love the 'river of tears hardens as your face fades'....i know that moment.
very powerful. and sad, yes!

Mine's up too...just in time before tomorrow I suppose..
Bella:)

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