extreme sadness
____heart empties
into river of tears
hardens
as your face fades
nothing, nothing left,nothing
no you ,no us
_____alone with
just shadows of where you once were
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
1916
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!
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4 comments:
very sad, but lovely.
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Heart breaking.
Phew, this really is extreme, you've captured the prompt word and catapulted it into mid-stream.
Nicely!
I love the 'river of tears hardens as your face fades'....i know that moment.
very powerful. and sad, yes!
Mine's up too...just in time before tomorrow I suppose..
Bella:)
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