look, look deep into your eyes
behind the color blue
______rimed with darkness
a nebula world, one few know
few care, few will ever see
in twilight, your eyes open
letting in the nights shadows
_______shadows that fill you
shadows that complete you
weaving webs of deceit and fear
beware the dimly lit paths
aglow around you, drawing, pulling
_______like spirit lights on the moors
we will suck you dry and snatch your soul
no second chance, no escape
11 comments:
This is like a diff world behind the eyes
Amazing, this is spot on! I'm fascinated with the little world of fractals and kaleidoscopic projections that are constantly 'playing' behind the eye. I made a thing to try to capture them from a Kool-Aid tube. I used the sugar free one, but you could ...
Did I tell you, I love your poetry!
Like the images here, particularly 'rimed with darkness'.
Jeeves, thanks so much for reading my work. There are many secrets behind peoples eyes.
Melanie
Andy I too love kaleidoscopic images
I am happy that you stopped to read my poem and thank you. It makes me happy that someone out there likes my poetry.
Melanie
wow! A great lecture of the darkness of someone that seem docile!
Thank you Gordon. I am glad that you liked this poem. There many sides to a story, Yes?
Melanie
Jill, glad you stopped by. No one really knows what lies within. Glad you liked it.
Melanie
Rather like a spell. Thanks for sharing this.
It sounds scary but what you've written is very true.
Oh How nice you've found me so that I found you... Pleased to meet you.
I so love your blog!
:)
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