red clouds
underling
candy colored pinwheels
spin across sky's of violet
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
1916
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!
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13 comments:
This is lovely! Spare words, yet so much is conveyed. I'm a blatherer, so I truly appreciate the poet who can gather up chose words and impart beautiful images with them.
Thanks for visiting my blog, too! See you in the Cyb, Melanie! Amy
Thanks Amy for your kind comments. I am glad you liked it.
Melanie
Beautiful words - so few but full of meaning.
Thank you Anthony. I am very glad you liked it.
Melanie
LOVE the imagery evoked! Just beautiful~
Superb imagery!
your poem is quite beautiful, as is the art you posted with this.
beautiful words. created beautiful image.
I know i am late in posting my thanks:
Patti
Sue
Tammie lee
and
Harshad mehta
Thanks so much for your comments.
Melanie
A gorgeous dawn!
short and sweet.. well put!
Sandy and Leo. Much thanks for your comments. I am glad you liked it.
Melanie
Melanie, I love all of your work, but your Haiku is so incredible. Thanks for sharing...
Jack
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