Tuesday, June 22, 2010

Dawn



red clouds
underling
candy colored pinwheels
spin across sky's of violet

13 comments:

sharplittlepencil said...

This is lovely! Spare words, yet so much is conveyed. I'm a blatherer, so I truly appreciate the poet who can gather up chose words and impart beautiful images with them.

Thanks for visiting my blog, too! See you in the Cyb, Melanie! Amy

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks Amy for your kind comments. I am glad you liked it.


Melanie

anthonynorth said...

Beautiful words - so few but full of meaning.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Anthony. I am very glad you liked it.


Melanie

Patti said...

LOVE the imagery evoked! Just beautiful~

Tumblewords: said...

Superb imagery!

Tammie Lee said...

your poem is quite beautiful, as is the art you posted with this.

Harshad mehta said...

beautiful words. created beautiful image.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

I know i am late in posting my thanks:
Patti
Sue
Tammie lee
and
Harshad mehta

Thanks so much for your comments.

Melanie

SandyCarlson said...

A gorgeous dawn!

Leo said...

short and sweet.. well put!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Sandy and Leo. Much thanks for your comments. I am glad you liked it.


Melanie

The Emotional Orphan said...

Melanie, I love all of your work, but your Haiku is so incredible. Thanks for sharing...
Jack