Monday, June 21, 2010

Pale Pink Seashells

quietly radiant...her slight figure
stepped swiftly though the cold sand
pausing now and again ever looking
for pale pink seashells that hugged
the azure shoreline...
she slowly walked the tides
each footstep erased with the ocean's pull
gone forever from time and memory


Anonymous said...

My favorite lines:
pale pink seashells that hug
the azure shoreline

Melanie, FYI, I'm a copy editor, and there is a typo here. It's "ocean's" in the last line. Just fix that and it will be perfect. Love your work! Amy

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks for catching my mistake and glad you liked it...


Systematic Weasel said...

A wonderfully written piece! Thanks for sharing.