Friday, June 25, 2010

Night Passion



summers heat paints red sky's
soft bodies cling fire flashes
low moans rise with the moon

sultry darkness calls all
the new moons sweet taste of passion
lovers kiss in twilight

10 comments:

sharplittlepencil said...

Well, well, Melanie. This is an erotic poem! Way to go... this summer season seems to be bringing a lot of mango-tinged lust into our work... Amy

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks SLP.....
Yes this seen to be my summer of passion and lust. These hot night do call to me.
I happy that you liked it



Melanie

Dances With Loons said...

Yes, this poem definitely gets one "in the mood" doesn't it? Beautiful.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks DWL. I am glad you liked it.


Melanie

one more believer said...

is it hot in here??!!!.... summer does make one sweat... ok, enuf of funnies... this is beautiful ku melanie... especially so the line .."..low moans rise with the moon..."...

Stan Ski said...

Summer love moods well depicted.

Diane T said...

Well, well, well! Your haikus certainly fit the title! Very well done!

Derrick said...

Of course, sometimes it's just too hot!

Mary said...

Beautiful and VERY sensual!

http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2010/06/six-english-haiku.html

ravenswingpoetry.com said...

This poem is a gem, and I especially adore the image in the first stanza of the red sky, the fire, and the moon.

-Nicole