Cassiopeia Rises: Night Passion

Friday, June 25, 2010

Night Passion

summers heat paints red sky's
soft bodies cling fire flashes
low moans rise with the moon

sultry darkness calls all
the new moons sweet taste of passion
lovers kiss in twilight

10 comments:

Anonymous said...: Well, well, Melanie. This is an erotic poem! Way to go... this summer season seems to be bringing a lot of mango-tinged lust into our work... Amy; June 25, 2010 at 11:33 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Much thanks SLP.....
Yes this seen to be my summer of passion and lust. These hot night do call to me.
I happy that you liked it

Melanie; June 26, 2010 at 1:28 PM
Dances With Loons said...: Yes, this poem definitely gets one "in the mood" doesn't it? Beautiful.; June 27, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Much thanks DWL. I am glad you liked it.

Melanie; June 27, 2010 at 12:37 PM
one more believer said...: is it hot in here??!!!.... summer does make one sweat... ok, enuf of funnies... this is beautiful ku melanie... especially so the line .."..low moans rise with the moon..."...; June 30, 2010 at 3:59 PM
Stan Ski said...: Summer love moods well depicted.; June 30, 2010 at 8:36 PM
Diane T said...: Well, well, well! Your haikus certainly fit the title! Very well done!; June 30, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Unknown said...: Of course, sometimes it's just too hot!; July 1, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Mary said...: Beautiful and VERY sensual!

http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2010/06/six-english-haiku.html; July 1, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Anonymous said...: This poem is a gem, and I especially adore the image in the first stanza of the red sky, the fire, and the moon.

-Nicole; July 1, 2010 at 10:03 AM