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Very, very sensual. Lovely.
I don't know why Paige said it was softly sensual.. This was just very very deeply sensual :D Excellent writing!
Much thanks Daydreamertoo for stopping by. Glad you liked my poem.Melanie
Thank you Paige for you kind comment. I was going for a very sensual feeling. Loved your blog.Melanie
Thank you Leo. That is what I was going for. So glad you liked it.Melanie
My breath—I’ve never seen youBut in the Catacombs of Aspired inspirations Where versified Stanzas roam About in the undergroundTunnels of My imagination andYet, just like velum waves Go to the rhythm of the Ebbing sea so do My thoughts spur the Swelling of Your ripened breastsAnd without Forethought butBy purest impulse,I sense plum-purple peaks Awaken angrily by The briefest Brush of my stirring kiss©2011 j.a.o.a.
Oh Jose, you make me tremble and fill my longing, my need so beautifully.Yours words do strange things to my body. So lovely. I can but thank you once again.Melanie
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!