Tuesday, August 30, 2011

A Deep Breath


a deep breath a sigh
our bodies move in a trance
as we intertwine

8 comments:

Daydreamertoo said...

Very, very sensual. Lovely.

Paige said...

softly sensual.

Leo said...

I don't know why Paige said it was softly sensual.. This was just very very deeply sensual :D Excellent writing!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Daydreamertoo for stopping by. Glad you liked my poem.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Paige for you kind comment. I was going for a very sensual feeling. Loved your blog.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you Leo. That is what I was going for. So glad you liked it.


Melanie

doings of lovers haiku senryu poetry said...

My breath—
I’ve never seen you
But in the
Catacombs of
Aspired inspirations
Where versified
Stanzas roam
About in the underground
Tunnels of
My imagination and
Yet, just like velum waves
Go to the rhythm of the
Ebbing sea so do
My thoughts spur the
Swelling of
Your ripened breasts
And without
Forethought but
By purest impulse,
I sense plum-purple peaks
Awaken angrily by
The briefest
Brush of my stirring kiss
©2011 j.a.o.a.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Oh Jose, you make me tremble and fill my longing, my need so beautifully.
Yours words do strange things to my body. So lovely. I can but thank you once again.

Melanie