we breathe now as one
each breath, each lingering kiss
binds us forever
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
1916
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!
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21 comments:
Lovely...to pair it with a dance image brilliant...the dance of life
lovely romantic Haiku, love the pic too, doing the Tango? this was a treat to read!
You convey a lovely, romantic moment in this haiku. Very nice!
Delightfully romantic ... I like it!!! :-)
Delightfully romantic ... I like it!!! :-)
Romantic and sensuous. The lingering kiss lingers on...
Just beautiful. The painting is a great accompaniment to your poem. I used to have a similar picture hanging in my red kitchen. This artist does wonderful work.
Beautiful. Very-well written! :)
A beautifully romantic haiku.Thanks for a great read.
Thanks Susie. Glad you liked it.
Melanie
Much thanks Amanda for reading my Haiku.
Melanie
Thank you Judith. I love to write romantic poems. So happy you liked it.
Melanie
Thanks Becca for stopping to read my Haiku. Glad you enjoyed it.
Melanie
Kaykuala, always glad to hear from you. Happy you liked it.
Melanie
Yes, I too love this artist. I used the image to give a moment of love and how two become one. So glad you liked it.
Melanie
Vinati, thanks so much for your kind comment.
Melanie
Thank you, mjshorts for reading my Haiku. Glad you liked it.
Melanie
Beautiful poem, also the images.
Romantic! Beautifully expressed passion..!
Thanks again Ina for reading my Haiku. To me the binding of two lovers is nature at it's best.
Melanie
Once again thank you Leo for your comment.
Melanie
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