Saturday, June 5, 2010

Too Close In The Dark



love hurts love burns
it brakes the heart
it wounds the soul
drawn to close to its flame

mummer's in the dark
sighs and whispers
oh oh my love
to hot to brief to close we melt away

5 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

This is very beautiful.. loved every word and the magic..

We melt away to emerge closer.. Very passionate poem this..

Do visit to see on the prompt Love.. and thank you for such a lovely prompt.. Let us keep our appointment with ICARUS..

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank You Ramesh for your kind comments and yes lets meet on the prompt ICARUS.


Melanie

SandyCarlson said...

I know this heartache. Thank you for capturing it in words. Love brakes my heart over and over these days.

SandyCarlson said...

I know this heartache. Thank you for capturing it in words. Love brakes my heart over and over these days.

Jim said...

I like this Melanie. I believe every word.
Then,

love comes love goes
it breaks the heart
it wounds the soul
then it goes as we melt away

been there done that
memories last
memories fade
new love found come another day
..