Friday, September 24, 2010

Autumn Haiku



sandy beaches bare
misty clouds cloak the thin tide
faint laughter lingers

13 comments:

ρομπερτ said...

a very felt entry of yours. beautifully haunting in the good sense.

please have a wonderful weekend.

daily athens

SandyCarlson said...

Oh, for that laughter.

Harshad mehta said...

Made me smile.

Jeeves said...

Lovely...faint laugh evokes a pleasant smile

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Once again Robert, I thank you for reading my poem and for your wonderful comment.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Yes Sandy. It seems to echo down the years. All those days at the beach when my boys were young. Thanks for your comment and I am glad that you liked it.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Harshad, Hello my friend I am glad it made you smile.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Jeeves. When ever I feel down I go to the ocean and remember my little sugar coated(sand) babies and all the sand castles they built.



Melanie

Nevine said...

Haiku is such a lovely and tight poetic form. You captured a season... quite beautifully... in so few words.

Thank you for the nice words at my place... and for leaving me your trail!

Nevine

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Nevine, thanks for stopping by. I am glad you liked my poem. Come again.



Melanie

Cildemer said...

My friend Nevine has said it all! I loved your poem too;o)
Thank you so much for your visit and nice comment. And I feel so happy to join your members and be side by side with Nevine;o)

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Have a wonderful weekend*******

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Clidemer for stopping by. I am very glad to meet you. I love your site.
So glad you liked my work.


Melanie

Sherry Blue Sky said...

This is extremely beautiful. I love it. Perfection! I love the faint lingering laughter........