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a very felt entry of yours. beautifully haunting in the good sense. please have a wonderful weekend.daily athens
Oh, for that laughter.
Made me smile.
Lovely...faint laugh evokes a pleasant smile
Once again Robert, I thank you for reading my poem and for your wonderful comment.Melanie
Yes Sandy. It seems to echo down the years. All those days at the beach when my boys were young. Thanks for your comment and I am glad that you liked it.Melanie
Harshad, Hello my friend I am glad it made you smile.Melanie
Much thanks Jeeves. When ever I feel down I go to the ocean and remember my little sugar coated(sand) babies and all the sand castles they built.Melanie
Haiku is such a lovely and tight poetic form. You captured a season... quite beautifully... in so few words.Thank you for the nice words at my place... and for leaving me your trail!Nevine
Nevine, thanks for stopping by. I am glad you liked my poem. Come again.Melanie
My friend Nevine has said it all! I loved your poem too;o)Thank you so much for your visit and nice comment. And I feel so happy to join your members and be side by side with Nevine;o)***Have a wonderful weekend*******
Much thanks Clidemer for stopping by. I am very glad to meet you. I love your site.So glad you liked my work.Melanie
This is extremely beautiful. I love it. Perfection! I love the faint lingering laughter........
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!