Monday, September 27, 2010

Sacred




unmarked mossy ground
bares witness those that were
sacred tears still flow

21 comments:

ρομπερτ said...

How else could the mose still grow - yet having the colour of hope.

Please have a wonderful Tuesday.

daily athens

Judy Roney said...

This is touching and beautifully simple.

The Write Girl said...

Lovely Haiku...the last line is stunning.

SandyCarlson said...

A silent, yet eloquent, witness, friend.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks DA,Glad you liked my haiku.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Judy, much thanks for stopping by and reading my work. So happy you liked it.

Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

TWG, I am a bit rusty but am glad you liked it.



Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

As always Sandy, your comments mean a great deal to me. Glad you liked it.


Melanie

magiceye said...

wow
this is lovely!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks magiceye. So glad you liked it


Melanie

Collective Epiphanies said...

Beautifully expressed with a hint of old world style. A silent sadness. I like it.

Thanks for stopping by and joining :)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you for reading my work. I am so glad that you liked it.


Melanie

Jingle said...

breath taking Haiku.

Rumya said...

A lovely Haiku for the prompt - sacred!! :)

Leo said...

really beautiful ku, Melanie.. the last line takes the cake for sure! :)

rashmi said...

wow,lovely.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Jingle, so glad you like my Ku.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Rumya, thanks for your comment.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Hi Leo, so glad you enjoy my Haiku.



Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Rashmi, glad you liked my Ku. Much thanks.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Rumya, for some reason blogger will not let me post on your blog. Just wanted to say I like your poems very much.

Melanie