| When she spoke her words became shades of silver and gray Filling the morning mist rising from her body with a rainbow of thoughts In her mind she could see herself covered in their silky touch. Colors sparkled as she moved breathing in and out she walked shimmering colors swirling around her In a maze she walked while jeweled tones fell gently beneath her feet. Her eyes opened upon the morning world seeing what others could not The color of her words filled her with wonder as her laughter echoed in silver and gray |
11 comments:
"as her laughter echoed in silver and gray"......beautifully colorful images throughout........I love this one!
Thanks again SBS for reading more of my work. I love the colors of your site and your poetry.
Melanie
Beautiful poem! Absolutely love this.
You are obviously a shimmery glittery person! I love this whoever it is!
Melanie this is so beautiful!
Pamela
Really like the idea of speaking in colors and it makes your poem both sparkle, and move with slow grace.
Elizabeth
This is beautiful, a visual, sensual delight. Love your final lines:
The color of her words
filled her with wonder
as her laughter echoed
in silver and gray
Melanie, what a beautiful poem!or
A lovely dreamy atmosphere here with light and ethereal silver and grey!
Beautiful, Melanie!
colours lay bare my soul
Melanie, the mere idea of words taking on color, her laughter echoing in silver and gray... stunning. You should publish this, truly. I like all your work, but this left me breathless.
Peace, Amy
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