Wednesday, November 10, 2010

Melting With In

she clasped the knife close
blending into black shadows
and waited for him

now the time had come
years and years of pain and fear
will melt away with him

1 comment:

Catherine Mackie said...

Hi. This is a very expressive haiku. I do think though that you should change the word clasp to either clasps or clasped for it to be gramatically correct. Revenge, it seems, is going to be sweet... or is it justice that is going to be swift... Either way I like it...