layered clouds of mist
ride the silver lit ocean
pinwheel colors rise
mystic fall shadows
moonbeams light the changing stars
magic fills the void
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14 comments:
Wonderful poem..I esp.like the end
Magic fills the voids :)
Thanks uma.a. Glad you liked it.
Melanie
Nice haikus...
I agree with Uma too... :)
Much thanks Sumit and thanks for following me.
Melanie
Hi, Thank you so much for following my blog and for your kind comments.
These are beautiful words! I too especially like the last line, and also the first two. These three lines in themselves would form their own poem:
"Layered clouds of mist
ride the silver lit ocean,
magic fills the void"
(I hope you don't mind me putting your lines togther like that, please feel free to delete my comments if it offends)
Words I wish I'd come up with myself!
...exquisitely clever... i like not only the first, second or the last line but i like every single words you used and painted here... your poems are the real layered clouds of mist that fills our(your readers) emptiness... cheers!!!:)
TC.
~Kelvin
beautiful...nice haikus, Melanie.. its always lovely to see u at HH :)
Great haikus. I agree with Dan that you could have created another brilliant one by combining first two and last lines... Well written and visually evocative.
Dan, we are all here to support and give advice own our poetry. I welcome your comments and your use of my words. It sounds better the way you put it. Thanks very much.
Melanie
So glad you liked this poem Kevin. I always feel that I am painting with words.Much thanks for your comments.
Melanie
Much thanks Leo. Glad you liked my work.
Melanie
Thank you Catherine for reading my KUs. I was in the middle of a thought when I wrote them. As you say I could have woven the words in a different pattern. Glad you liked them.
Melanie
Sometimes the middle of a thought shows hidden depths.Such a soft feel to this and I love how they are Haiku but not in your face. They just seem natural and not forced.
Sarah, you are so sweet to come once again to read my Haiku. So glad you liked it.
Melanie
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