which way my heart goes
moving through time and sorrow
each step my soul weeps
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20 comments:
"each step my soul weeps"
Amazing...lovely haiku... :)
Thanks again my friend. Glad you liked it.
Melanie
...it has this intense feeling of darkness and wretchedness i just can't explain...
~Kelvin
I hope your sorrow is short-lived, and the weeping ends. Very poignant haiku this week! Well done :)
Very moving Thankas for dropping by and following my blog :O)
Thank you for reading my poem and you are most welcome.
Melanie
Don't worry Kevin, I am just a very moody person. It was raining when I wrote it and all the leaves are gone.
Melanie
Much thanks Jenn. I do so love your site.
Melanie
Pretty Haiku!!! It is GOOD to cry sometimes! xoxoxox
tc, thanks for stopping by. I am glad you like it.
Melanie
Aww.. Lovely words.. Awesome
--Someone Is Sepcial--
Love the rhythm your haiku brings to my heart. Sad, but intense at once. Have a wonderful weekend :).
Powerful, emotional, great writing loved the Haiku!
Melancholy like
Uninvited guest
Arrives and goes too
Its OK.. liked your haiku..
Very moving. Very melancholy.
Best wishes to you from Boonie
Much thanks Sis for stopping by. So happy you like my Haiku.
Melanie
BWA, glad you came by and happy that you like my Haiku.
Melanie
Ramesh, so true. Love your little Ku.
Melanie
hi melanie... mmm, it is good to hear one's heart beating and the steps of one's soul weeping... beautiful... haiku my heart.believe
I love this haiku. Tells me that no matter which way one turns there is sorrow, whether past, present or future...
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