Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Which Way My Heart



which way my heart goes
moving through time and sorrow
each step my soul weeps


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20 comments:

Sumit Sarkar said...

"each step my soul weeps"

Amazing...lovely haiku... :)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thanks again my friend. Glad you liked it.


Melanie

WINDOWLAD said...

...it has this intense feeling of darkness and wretchedness i just can't explain...

~Kelvin

Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog? said...

I hope your sorrow is short-lived, and the weeping ends. Very poignant haiku this week! Well done :)

Madeleine said...

Very moving Thankas for dropping by and following my blog :O)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you for reading my poem and you are most welcome.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Don't worry Kevin, I am just a very moody person. It was raining when I wrote it and all the leaves are gone.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Jenn. I do so love your site.


Melanie

turquoise cro said...

Pretty Haiku!!! It is GOOD to cry sometimes! xoxoxox

Cassiopeia Rises said...

tc, thanks for stopping by. I am glad you like it.


Melanie

Someone Is Special said...

Aww.. Lovely words.. Awesome

--Someone Is Sepcial--

Rosidah Abidin said...

Love the rhythm your haiku brings to my heart. Sad, but intense at once. Have a wonderful weekend :).

Bloggin'withAmanda said...

Powerful, emotional, great writing loved the Haiku!

Ramesh Sood said...

Melancholy like
Uninvited guest
Arrives and goes too

Its OK.. liked your haiku..

Boonie S said...

Very moving. Very melancholy.

Best wishes to you from Boonie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Sis for stopping by. So happy you like my Haiku.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

BWA, glad you came by and happy that you like my Haiku.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Ramesh, so true. Love your little Ku.


Melanie

ms pie said...

hi melanie... mmm, it is good to hear one's heart beating and the steps of one's soul weeping... beautiful... haiku my heart.believe

Catherine Mackie said...

I love this haiku. Tells me that no matter which way one turns there is sorrow, whether past, present or future...