remember the after glow of smiles
bright summer days
laughter whispering softly
an echo of life's path
let those who grieve
dry your tears my dears
on soft rose petals
left behind as I wait at rest
for you my heart when life is done
with primrose in my hair
25 comments:
lovely
"the after glow of smiles" -love that :)
Lovely, placid words.
Eileen
Such a pretty poem, beautiful imagery its really like a painting
A lovely poem enjoyable to read :)
Such a love song to those left behind. :)
wow this is a fantastic poem!
Beautiful! I really like this one!
Beautiful. I really like this one!
Great and precise rose petal imagery.
love this,
very lovely cooking yet well done.
A precious promise at life's end.
first compliments for this great blog!
the contents not really reflecting my sense of life but no doubt written bt the hand of somebody that loves poetry passaionately
well done
so dreamlike and lyrical
Simply lovely.
Penned like a perfect poet.
what a nicely crafted and soothing write!
A beautiful, reassuring, yet melancholic poem. I really enjoyed reading this one.
The Lonely Recluse.
A ballad of love:)
The touch of romance, in elegant imagery.. Well said, Melanie..
Sweet touching afterwords. Wanting others to remember only the goodness you have left behind.
this is sad, and it can hit hard, Thank you, much appreciated, WS
The ending image of a primrose in her hair is simply stunning..Jae
love the photo and the poem. great imagery
a truly beautiful tribute
Stunningly beautiful, with great feeling.
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