Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Sun Blind



blind in the sun light
my deep set eyes dead orbs
yet the sun warms me

I can hear the sea
echos fill my clouded eyes
my soul peels away

hot rain falls lightly
layer after layer melts
once more my eyes see

7 comments:

Judith C Evans said...

Such intense imagery connecting with nature. I especially love the middle stanza. Thank you for visiting my blog!

Rek said...

beautiful and vivid imagery...I can see too... thanks for visiting.

bharat chandran said...

Let the eye see the light
Take colours inside the soul!
:-)

Seek The Sun said...

Great imagery! I like to think of poems as paintings, a word image.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks, Judith, Rek, bharat, and Seek The Sun for stopping by and reading my Poem.


Melanie

mindlovemisery said...

Gorgeous imagery! I loved it

Cassiopeia Rises said...

mlm, much thank for reading my poem and for your comment.



Melanie