Cassiopeia Rises: Sun Blind

Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Sun Blind

blind in the sun light
my deep set eyes dead orbs
yet the sun warms me

I can hear the sea
echos fill my clouded eyes
my soul peels away

hot rain falls lightly
layer after layer melts
once more my eyes see

7 comments:

Judith C Evans said...: Such intense imagery connecting with nature. I especially love the middle stanza. Thank you for visiting my blog!; June 21, 2011 at 2:09 PM
Rek Sesh said...: beautiful and vivid imagery...I can see too... thanks for visiting.; June 21, 2011 at 3:14 PM
bharat chandran said...: Let the eye see the light
Take colours inside the soul!
:-); June 21, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Virginia Robert said...: Great imagery! I like to think of poems as paintings, a word image.; June 21, 2011 at 10:31 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Much thanks, Judith, Rek, bharat, and Seek The Sun for stopping by and reading my Poem.

Melanie; June 22, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Anonymous said...: Gorgeous imagery! I loved it; June 24, 2011 at 1:53 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: mlm, much thank for reading my poem and for your comment.

Melanie; June 24, 2011 at 4:42 PM

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