Saturday, June 25, 2011

Summer's End.



Within this stone,lies a heart buried deep. Silent,still,hollow it beats no more. Where once love blossomed true only to be cut down at summers end. Once she graced this earth with beauty.Forgotten but for he who loved her. Dear John she called him. He waits as the days turn into winter. Waiting for death to call.


I was too late for the last prompt so I used them both to tell my story.

10 comments:

Nonna Beach said...

Excellent, vivid and a touching description of eternal love, longing and loss. Kudos for combining 2 prompts so beautifully !

Nonna Beach said...

BTW, your link doesn't come directly here, it goes to a page that says no such post/document or whatever...

Judie said...

Hmmm--Mine is a continuation of my last two Centii. We are thinking alike, I believe. Excellent words!!!!

jeff campbell said...

Very evocative writing...I love the idea of combining prompts...well done...Peace and blessings

cj Schlottman said...

This is visual and so beautifully gut-wrenching. Wonderful piece, and you are so clever to combine the two.

Namaste.........cj

Old Raven said...

But summer is just upon us! I enjoy your words.

Anna said...

Clever of you to combine the two prompts! But it took me a while to find you!
Now that I am here I am glad that I perservered!
Best wishes,
Anna
Sanna writes to John Tell-Anna's SC wk 60

Jo said...

oh how sad but beautiful! and love that you were able to use both prompts, and you did so with such skill! Wonderful piece of writing!

Tgoette said...

Lovely piece of writing! Excellent job in using both prompts! This was such a visual and moving centus, no easy feat with just 62 words! Great job!

Rek said...

So poignant and graceful in their depiction of love, loss and longing.