above the blue ocean
crying out a sad call
waves respond to their rhythm
back and forth the foam rises
all is lost in wind and rain
mystical forms ride the tides
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18 comments:
As always, your poem reads like a dream Melanie. Beautiful!
Hi Melanie ~~ There's a video of a murmuration of starlings in flight going around on the internet and the blogs. They fly in waves over the ocean waves just like your poem. There are a lot. I can't see how there could possibly be food for all of them.
They birds will come another day after the wind and rain and foam subside. (My happy ending.)
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Thanks The Write Girl, so glad you liked my poem.
Melanie
Hi Jim, how are you? I have never seen the starlings in flight over the the waves. It sounds beautiful. I will have to look for the video. Glad you liked my poem.
I am still in a great deal of pain with my broken shoulder and upper arm. Wish it would go away.
Melanie
What a wonderfull poem, so touchy and full of something I would call spiritual energy.
Namaste
The birds and water moving in unison...nature's dirge spoken in motion...wonderful poem
Beautifully mystical.
nicely done.
Lovely words and imagery:)
Thank you Chevrefeuille, glad you liked it.
Melanie
Much thanks Susie for stopping by and reading my poem. Happy you liked it.
Melanie
anthony, thanks for your kind words.
Melanie
Much thanks Live2cherish.
Melanie
Thank you Tarang for reading my work.
Melanie
You have a very unique style to say what you want to..softly...good one..
A beautiful web of the mystical forces of nature transcending human understanding !! Fascinating Melanie!!
Nicely undulating rhythm in your poem. I can just imagine the birds over the waves. Wish I were there...
WOW!!! on so many levels your poem is not only beautiful but tells a tale hidden in plain sight...
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