Tuesday, November 29, 2011

When I Was Young

when I was younger
so much younger then today
never needed love

not in any way
through the many years to come
I danced all alone

love was just for fun
now those days have come and gone
and I long for you

long for your sweet touch
need to whisper words of love
giving you my heart

11 comments:

Shreya said...

Beautiful. :)

http://www.iredeem.blogspot.com/

anthonynorth said...

Lovely words. I ended up singing them - reminded me of The Beatles.

beccagivens said...

Caught me ... as memories often do!! Well done!

beccagivens said...

Caught me ... as memories often do!! Well done!

Sarah said...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mBLLIftWqfQ

I though this was part of the Beatles lyrics

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Much thanks Shreya for your comment.



Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Some of the words are from "Help" by the Beatles of long ago in my youth. Funny how they fit so well.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Me too becca. Memories of long ago.


Melanie

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Sarah, yes they are. These words are stuck in my mind forever. Funny how they just fit so well.


Melanie

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

What a lovely poem!

Neha said...

Cutest poem :) loved it!!