Cassiopeia Rises: Covert Stars

Saturday, December 10, 2011

Covert Stars

covert stars shine bright
in the deep blackness of space
lighting up our sky's

12 comments:

Anonymous said...: those hidden stars sure are bright; December 10, 2011 at 2:53 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Yes and they sing in the night.

Melanie; December 10, 2011 at 3:12 PM
anthonynorth said...: And a beautiful sight they are, too.; December 10, 2011 at 4:50 PM
Grace said...: I like them twinkling and brightening our sky ~; December 10, 2011 at 7:07 PM
Anonymous said...: I like this simply because your use of the words "Our sky". it might mean the night,with its magnanimity, it could also be the deep channels of our inner self.:); December 10, 2011 at 10:00 PM
Anonymous said...: Beautiful!!!; December 10, 2011 at 10:06 PM
Unknown said...: Lighting up our sky's s? I'm a little confused. Not in an omg way. I like your poem :) And the thought that we're all here under the same light.; December 11, 2011 at 7:27 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you all for reading my poem.

Melanie; December 11, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Chèvrefeuille said...: Wonderful haiku. I love the image of the stars.

my daughter laughs
"I want them all for a friend"
the bright Milky Way; December 11, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Ramesh Sood said...: A very beautiful sight this!!! Glittering stars..

Came from Haiku Heights.. do visit me..through HH..

My OSI post is here:

http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2011/12/can-i-ever-be-her-knight.html; December 13, 2011 at 4:28 AM
Olive Tree said...: solemnly beautiful! I loved it. I especially love how you stay true to the haiku form by including the nature aspect into your haiku. I always found the nature aspect to be the most neglected part and difficult one to include. I enjoyed yours a lot.; December 13, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Anonymous said...: Beautiful haiku.; December 14, 2011 at 6:57 AM

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