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those hidden stars sure are bright
Yes and they sing in the night.Melanie
And a beautiful sight they are, too.
I like them twinkling and brightening our sky ~
I like this simply because your use of the words "Our sky". it might mean the night,with its magnanimity, it could also be the deep channels of our inner self.:)
Lighting up our sky's s? I'm a little confused. Not in an omg way. I like your poem :) And the thought that we're all here under the same light.
Thank you all for reading my poem.Melanie
Wonderful haiku. I love the image of the stars.my daughter laughs"I want them all for a friend"the bright Milky Way
A very beautiful sight this!!! Glittering stars..Came from Haiku Heights.. do visit me..through HH..My OSI post is here:http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2011/12/can-i-ever-be-her-knight.html
solemnly beautiful! I loved it. I especially love how you stay true to the haiku form by including the nature aspect into your haiku. I always found the nature aspect to be the most neglected part and difficult one to include. I enjoyed yours a lot.
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Edna St. Vincent Millay
My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends-
It gives a lovely light!