Saturday, December 10, 2011

Covert Stars

covert stars shine bright
in the deep blackness of space
lighting up our sky's

13 comments:

zongrik said...

those hidden stars sure are bright

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Yes and they sing in the night.


Melanie

anthonynorth said...

And a beautiful sight they are, too.

Grace said...

I like them twinkling and brightening our sky ~

Sheelonee Mukherjee said...

I like this simply because your use of the words "Our sky". it might mean the night,with its magnanimity, it could also be the deep channels of our inner self.:)

beccagivens said...

Beautiful!!!

Jessica Maybury said...

Lighting up our sky's s? I'm a little confused. Not in an omg way. I like your poem :) And the thought that we're all here under the same light.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you all for reading my poem.

Melanie

Chèvrefeuille said...

Wonderful haiku. I love the image of the stars.

my daughter laughs
"I want them all for a friend"
the bright Milky Way

Andressa C. said...

:)

Ramesh Sood said...

A very beautiful sight this!!! Glittering stars..

Came from Haiku Heights.. do visit me..through HH..

My OSI post is here:

http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2011/12/can-i-ever-be-her-knight.html

Olive Tree said...

solemnly beautiful! I loved it. I especially love how you stay true to the haiku form by including the nature aspect into your haiku. I always found the nature aspect to be the most neglected part and difficult one to include. I enjoyed yours a lot.

Madeleine said...

Beautiful haiku.