Tuesday, December 6, 2011

The Space Between Us

the space between us
can it grow any larger
days past so quickly

I long for your arms
to hold me close at night time
oh my love please please


Priyanka Bhowmick said...

may this space be filled with joy again.. nicely presented.

Anonymous said...

Passionate longing! Beautiful!!

Grace said...

Full of sadness and longing..nice haiku ~

Anonymous said...

very nice. I like the first one especially. It's amazing how the prompt space can pull out the theme longing on so many people, including me. Thanks for visiting mine.

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

sweet and sad. well said.

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

hope all is well.

Thanks for your support to poets rally in the past,
hope to see you back some time.

stay blessed, your talent rocks.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.