Cassiopeia Rises: Haiku Heights.......Relaxed form

Thursday, September 13, 2012

Haiku Heights.......Relaxed form

at last I see
elusive until now
their silver tears

meshed in dreams
a soft garden path
steal away steal away all pain

13 comments:

Anonymous said...: I like the first one of these especially.; September 13, 2012 at 6:04 PM
Barbara said...: These are beautiful images! Mysterious too! I like them.; September 13, 2012 at 6:31 PM
Grace said...: I like the elusive silver tears ~ Nice one ~

Can you please turn off your word verification for easy commenting?; September 13, 2012 at 6:45 PM
Ellecee said...: I enjoyed these very much, especially the very last line. Special.; September 13, 2012 at 7:57 PM
Grace said...: Go to Dashboard,
Settings,
Post and Comments - Show word verification - Click NO

Hope this helps ~; September 13, 2012 at 8:08 PM
PattiKen said...: There are some lovely lines in these, especially the final line.; September 13, 2012 at 9:11 PM
odyzz said...: I loved "steal away steal away all pain" beautiful!!

Getting very difficult with word verification; September 14, 2012 at 8:01 AM
Reading Pleasure said...: lovely imagery. well written; September 14, 2012 at 8:18 AM
joanne said...: silver tears and pain...the ending is hopeful...lovely words; September 14, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Tigerbrite said...: Romantic and mysterious :)
This word thing is really tricky
:(; September 14, 2012 at 12:16 PM
Chèvrefeuille said...: Very romantic writings.; September 14, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Vinay Leo R. said...: I agree, very romantic writing :); September 15, 2012 at 12:47 AM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: You draw me in with your opening words: "at last I see."

That simple statement makes me want to see what you see too!

Revelation; September 15, 2012 at 7:01 PM

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