Thursday, September 13, 2012

Haiku Heights.......Relaxed form

at last I see
elusive until now
their silver tears

meshed in dreams
a soft garden path
steal away steal away all pain 




13 comments:

poetry-diary.com said...

I like the first one of these especially.

Barbara said...

These are beautiful images! Mysterious too! I like them.

Grace said...

I like the elusive silver tears ~ Nice one ~

Can you please turn off your word verification for easy commenting?

Ellecee said...

I enjoyed these very much, especially the very last line. Special.

Grace said...

Go to Dashboard,
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Post and Comments - Show word verification - Click NO

Hope this helps ~

PattiKen said...

There are some lovely lines in these, especially the final line.

odyzz said...

I loved "steal away steal away all pain" beautiful!!


Getting very difficult with word verification

Reading Pleasure said...

lovely imagery. well written

joanne said...

silver tears and pain...the ending is hopeful...lovely words

Tigerbrite said...

Romantic and mysterious :)
This word thing is really tricky
:(

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Very romantic writings.

Leo said...

I agree, very romantic writing :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

You draw me in with your opening words: "at last I see."

That simple statement makes me want to see what you see too!

Revelation