Tuesday, September 11, 2012

One Single Impression

my heart slowly beats
each day that you are not here
pain echos your name

3 comments:

Harshad mehta said...

That pain can be felt in these words.

Jim said...

Hi Melanie ~~ I could have sworn that I saw the word 'lonely' in this the first time I read it.
I was a nice read and I caught the very intense feeling.
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my heart's love songs said...

i love this! wonderful use of the prompt.