Tuesday, September 11, 2012

One Single Impression

my heart slowly beats
each day that you are not here
pain echos your name


Harshad mehta said...

That pain can be felt in these words.

Jim said...

Hi Melanie ~~ I could have sworn that I saw the word 'lonely' in this the first time I read it.
I was a nice read and I caught the very intense feeling.

my heart's love songs said...

i love this! wonderful use of the prompt.