Cassiopeia Rises: Fleeting....Haiku My Heart

Monday, October 11, 2010

fleeting are our days
count count the hours as they pass
petals drop fore lorn

Leslie said...: How true. Our days are fleeting - the flowers fade. Yet somehow, knowing this is the first step toward finding joy. Lovely haiku.; October 11, 2010 at 11:41 AM
rebecca said...: cassiopeia....
perfect.
you have so haiku'ed my heart!
welcome ...
never stop!; October 11, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Anonymous said...: I like this a lot. Direct but gentle. Perfect.

Have a nice day, Boonie; October 12, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: Inspired by that ghostly image:

I lift the knocker,
let it fall—no one answers,
ah! no one at all!

Thank you!; October 13, 2010 at 8:25 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thank you my friend. You have captured the reason in my Haiku

Much thanks for stopping by

Melanie; October 13, 2010 at 10:10 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: rebecca, much thanks for read my Haiku and thanks for for welcome

You have a wonderful site. I love poetry with out prompts

Melanie; October 13, 2010 at 10:16 AM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Leslie, Thanks for stopping by. I am glad you liked it

Melanie; October 14, 2010 at 12:38 PM
Cassiopeia Rises said...: Thanks Boonie, I am happy that you liked it.

Melanie; October 14, 2010 at 12:43 PM