Monday, May 24, 2010

Floating...........



floating my soul drifts
lightly over fields of grass
covered in blue haze....

8 comments:

fourwindshaiga said...

A good meditation, I am thinking.

Quiet Paths said...

I know this sensation; this place.

anthonynorth said...

That was really peaceful.

BETO PALAIO said...

So lovely... Its like floating with sky upside down...

The Write Girl said...

What a beautiful poem. Your words are tranquil and we can certainly float in your beautiful poetry. Lovely writing as always :)

Tumblewords: said...

A peaceful feeling!

lucychili said...

mm like a bird

Jim said...

Hi Melanie ~~ This is such a peaceful floating piece of work. It makes me want to float along with your poet.
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