Monday, May 24, 2010

Floating...........



floating my soul drifts
lightly over fields of grass
covered in blue haze....
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8 comments:

Anonymous said...

A good meditation, I am thinking.

May 24, 2010 at 3:53 PM
Quiet Paths said...

I know this sensation; this place.

May 24, 2010 at 4:12 PM
anthonynorth said...

That was really peaceful.

May 24, 2010 at 4:36 PM
Beto Palaio said...

So lovely... Its like floating with sky upside down...

May 24, 2010 at 5:46 PM
The Write Girl said...

What a beautiful poem. Your words are tranquil and we can certainly float in your beautiful poetry. Lovely writing as always :)

May 26, 2010 at 10:30 PM
Tumblewords: said...

A peaceful feeling!

May 27, 2010 at 12:30 AM
lucychili said...

mm like a bird

May 27, 2010 at 4:25 AM
Jim said...

Hi Melanie ~~ This is such a peaceful floating piece of work. It makes me want to float along with your poet.
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May 29, 2010 at 5:55 AM

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