Tuesday, May 4, 2010

The Maze Of My Heart



puzzled, lost in shadows of night
visions weave in and out
all in knots caught up in you
in the maze of my heart

hidden away my face blank
none to see my truth
none to know my thoughts
an enigma, mystery of my past

11 comments:

Patti said...

That is beautiful! I especially love the 2nd stanza!

Tammy Brierly said...

I'm so open and transparent but I wish sometimes I could be like this poem.

Gel said...

Powerful title to lead us into your poem. My heart beats rapidly as all of my senses are awakened by you.

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, good work! I'd be hard pressed to think of someone who knew me, too!

The Write Girl said...

Beautifully written. The imagery creates an enigma. Lovely take on the prompt.

Amity said...

Very deep Melissa, and I know all of use have that enigma in ourselves!

fourwindshaiga said...

Very beautiful. I wonder if we all feel this way, at times?

SandyCarlson said...

That kind of solitude just plain hurts.

Aayushi Mehta said...

Written wonderfully, love the phrase in the title.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Oh thank you all for your lovely and kind comments. I am sorry but had to thank you all at one time. Please know each and every comment means a great deal to me.


Melanie

flaubert said...

Absolutely beautiful Melanie.
Pamela