Monday, May 24, 2010

Sand Writing

my love, I can still feel you next to me
here along the hot beach front sands
I can still hear the beats of our entwined hearts

I write your name in the sand mixed with tears
sweet tears from your eyes and mine together
though I am alone your love is with me forever


Linda Goin said...

Oh, that is so sad. But, beautifully written.

vivienne blake said...

I agree. It's such a fine line when, writing love poetry, between sincerity and schmaltz; you have stayed well on the right side.

Wayne Pitchko said...

touching indeed.....thanks for sharing your words Melanie